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Politics is like a dog fight
Many come to see one die
And another stand victory
They fight a dirty game
Think they have control
But are puppets with no master
Quick jabs and low blows
Will lead one ahead
The other retaliate
Go for the neck
We cheer and throw money
All is such a waste
For no matter which dog comes out on top
For no matter how much they are praised
They are still just a dog
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Sorry if this isn't my best I'm half asleep, I was playing Scrabble with my grandma and we just kept seeing politcal ad after ad, and that's all my dad ever talks about anymore.

I try to avoid mentioning it but I do live in the US and it's close to voting time. I hope you don't take offense to my poem but this is my view on politics, just a dog fight, except legal.
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first of all...never apologize for your own personal opionion...you have the right to use your poetry to express any idea, belief or emotion that touches your life...the proponents of political correctness have crippled this nation and tied the hands of justice as WELL as creative license...lol...sorry...did NOT mean to stage a soap box serenade in YOUR comment box...so...yeah...the poem was dead on...politics...especially in an election year is just ugly...people pay their tainted money and bet on the dog of choice...then cheer and leer at the visciousness their 'BOY' can exhibit when it comes to cheap shots and dirty punches...the entire spectrum of our electoral process just sickens me...awesome poem....keep writing what grooves you...and for those that have a problem with your work...well...that's what your middle finger is for...lol
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*Shanster12 Aug 12, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you, I know and I'm proud of this poem, but I've seen people get vicious and I just don't want to get that.
Thank you for everything you said, I'm glad you liked it and I will always write what I feel.
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*Dark-Light-69 Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice couldn't have said it better myself.
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*Shanster12 Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Why Thank You
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:iconlilredwagon:
WELL said!! ... My BEST .... LRW.
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*Shanster12 Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank You!
I've been looking at all your links, you couldn't have put them all in one message?
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HELLO! .... I TRIED that but when I attempted to go 'back and forth' DA would not show the pages in same reverse order so I did them ONE at a time .... SMILES >....

BTW: I'm OLD .... 61 .... Be GENTLE .... WINK ....

My BEST to you and yours .... LRW.
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*Shanster12 Aug 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
okay sorry, I wasn't trying to sound mean or anything, I'm sorry if it came out that way.
thanks ;)
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Shanster12: HELLO, again! ... Did NOT take your above comments as 'mean' at all! .... I kept TRYING to copy/paste the 'links' above/addys here and put them in ONE 'comment box' area but kept 'losing' the 'page' when I tried to RETURN ....

If YOU can put them all in ONE box feel free! ... THANKS! ... Again, my BEST to you and yours and WELL said above!! ... LRW.
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